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Death By Words

By Sourceling | Posted: 28 December 2009

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Violence
Violence
Treacherous are the words of man,

As barbs perched upon hapless tongues of malice,

Seeking naught but to do harm with coiling efficient grace,

Piercing that of naked hearts and innocent souls. 

Mayhaps twould be kinder still to pierce the flesh . . .

Stabbing with one twist of the short blade,

Rending quite perfectly pure hearts of old,

Tearing asunder at such depths none can fathom,

Leaving in its wake gaping and sucking wounds.

But wait, I will aid you in your endeavors to inflict . . . 

I cleave this useless organ from mine chest.

I give it freely as I always have.

Hold it within your greedy palms,

As the last beat wanes and sputters . . .
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Comments 
JD Higginson
05 January 2010
Outstanding. Loved this piece from start to finish.

Great work.

JD
Grampa Pogi
05 January 2010
I feel like I'm reading Shakespeare.  Bravo Sourceling.

Grampa
Festerocious
07 January 2010
Though we have never met, nor hear each other I can hear your voice in the words and sentences.

You certainly have a talent for poetry, being able to draw the reader deeper into the verse as they almost see it through your eyes as you sit by the open fire reading aloud.


Marverous.
Sourceling
07 January 2010
Thank you so much everyone for your generous comments...I am so happy you took the time to stop by and have a read...and then to have commented as well...I believe it is so important to comment on others work...it is how we as writers, novelists, and poets learn and grow...Have a wonderful weekend...!!!

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