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Very good
As I have said before on other poems, good poetry makes the reader really think-- this poem does just that.
Great!
AUdrey
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Poignant, painful to the feelings, unbridledspirit. Sorrowful expression of a secret past (?) . . . buried in the lonely thoughts of a blithesome mask. Would it come out to free the wretchedness?
Grampa
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Thank you Audrey and Grandpa for your review. Grandpa this is not about my past if that is why you have thequestion mark there (I wasn't sure). I see alot of clients who live with a public persona that hiding a deeper sadness and loneliness. I just felt compelled to write about it. Thanks again both of you. I appreciate your feedback.
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Oops...I should have said Grampa not Grandpa. Sorry for the error.
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Yes, unbridledspirit, I thought it was personal, hence, the (?) in brackets, but now I know :-). Grandpa or Grampa, well, they're both the same :-)
Grampa
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Yes, like Audrey said it gets the reader thinking.
Your poems really grab onto the readers attention and holds onto it.
You have alot of different perspectives, which I really like. It's good to be able to do that so well.
As I've said several times, Excellent Work!
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Thank you Taylor. I really appreciate your comments and the time you took to read my poem. I'm glad that you liked it.
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