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I am Vici

By IamVici | Posted: 18 January 2010

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I f   I   h a d   a   w i s h  ......

Bubbles in my bubble bath
  --bubbles escaping--
      I'd jump quickly into one
             The wall of film behind me closing
                          in a twinkling -
               Ride it, float with it, maneuver it
                  roll it from the inside
                          navigate to the outside
                                  sail across the air
                                         in this transparent sphere
                                                        fly
                                                 climb
                                        up up and away
      See the world differently
                            Unlike that most people see
                                    Like the eagle views a wrinkled sea
             Catch the rainbow who's actually
                           more than willing
                                  to hitch a ride with me
                                        in my journey
  Pull away from the Earth
         The horizon encircling
                 moving up with me
                        dissolving  seemingly
                                My skin feeling
                                        The sun closer
                                       The air cooler
                           The cotton carpet floor floating
                    The cobalt canopy of skylight surrounding
Invite a bird to join in for an orbit
      To the dark side
            Stars signaling above
                                 Blinking below
                  The full moon that before looked
                          Like the perfect Host to swallow
                                 Craters appear and seem to grow
                                         Weren't they Neil Armstrong's footmarks
                                                 Some time ago?
                    . . . Dark to light . . .
                                                                           . . . Light to dark . . .
                             Is the Earth above or below? i !
                                     Maybe northeast maybe southwest ... ! ? i
                                            Never mind
                    Sit back
             Savor the sensuous scenery
                                         with my friendly company
     Wonder why not
                   share this marvel
                          this first hand beauty
                                  not readily available to many
  Maybe make fools like me
           way way wiser
                          Open minds
                                  Understand better
                                          Our threatened
                                                Bubble
                                                       inside the big bubble inside
                                                                               the big bubble ......
 As many as there are bubbles
                     There are Many who can
                            Jump in
                                   To Learn
                                           To appreciate
                                                  To save
                                                           To preserve
              This Beauty
                      That I'd come to comprehend
                                                           In my journey ...
                                           ...If I had a wish.
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Comments 
Grampa Pogi
18 January 2010
Hello Vici,

Your bubble is welcome here in the circle .... and it's great to follow the bubble as it floats away.  
I guess your wish had been granted. :-)
audreyhepburn
18 January 2010
Hi!
This is a very interesting poem!  I love the shape of it!
Looking forward to reading more of your work!
AUdrey
m n m n I
19 January 2010
I was the bird in your journey
just for a joy ride
but treated to the aesthetic experience
In the end 
A lesson to be learned
A call to action to save and preserve
the threatened bubble we inhabit
This Beauty called Earth . . .
IamVici
20 January 2010
Thank you for the comments
ChrissieJo
27 January 2010
Excellent! lots of effort put into this too.!!
IamVici
01 February 2010
Thank you, ChrissieJo
mature gent
09 February 2010
Using the floating lines to fullfill the words really works painting the picture of the verse a very clever poem and intresting well done I AM VICI
mature gent
Possum
10 February 2010
This is awesome, Vici.
Possum
13 February 2010
I love to be the rainbow in your journey.  So better check what's at the end of the rainbow for your wish might have already been granted.  Awesome work, Vici!
IamVici
22 February 2010
Thank you, mature gent
IamVici
22 February 2010
I'm sure what's waiting at the end of the rainbow is awesome, possum.

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