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Hello Vici,
Your bubble is welcome here in the circle .... and it's great to follow the bubble as it floats away.
I guess your wish had been granted. :-)
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Hi!
This is a very interesting poem! I love the shape of it!
Looking forward to reading more of your work!
AUdrey
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I was the bird in your journey
just for a joy ride
but treated to the aesthetic experience
In the end
A lesson to be learned
A call to action to save and preserve
the threatened bubble we inhabit
This Beauty called Earth . . .
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Thank you for the comments
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Excellent! lots of effort put into this too.!!
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Thank you, ChrissieJo
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Using the floating lines to fullfill the words really works painting the picture of the verse a very clever poem and intresting well done I AM VICI
mature gent
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This is awesome, Vici.
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I love to be the rainbow in your journey. So better check what's at the end of the rainbow for your wish might have already been granted. Awesome work, Vici!
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Thank you, mature gent
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I'm sure what's waiting at the end of the rainbow is awesome, possum.
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