In Response to: February Writing CLub by audreyhepburn

I am always being trodden on 
Why do I have this fate?
I get cracked, dirty, grimy gray
Why do I have this fate?

No one cares to clean me off
They just keep walking on
No one thinks to help me out
They just keep walking on

In the winter, I get cold
Not that anyone cares
In the summer, I heat up
Not that anyone cares

People drop their candy wrappers
They think that I won't mind
People jump and stomp around
They think that I won't mind

People think I don't have feelings
It's a cruel life, for sure
They laugh, and cry, but never stop
To talk to the poor old sidewalk

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taylorswift97

26 January 2010

This is cute! Really creative.

ChrissieJo

26 January 2010

This is very good. It Just tells me again and again that there is art in everything. Something important to bear in mind always and it could relate to other aspects of life too.

audreyhepburn

26 January 2010

Thanks guys!
Audrey

Also see: Sidewalks : A reply to audreyhepburn's "FEBRUARY WRITING CLUB!" (taylorswift97) • ~Dark Soul~ (Dark Angel) • Damaged (Dark Angel) • Untamable (Dark Angel) • Sacred Ground (Dark Angel) • Trampoline (taylorswift97) • Cometh, Oh Weary Tiger Moon (Gate Keeper) • Dear Tigress (Gate Keeper) • As The Sun Sets: Longer and Revised Version (audreyhepburn) • Who am I ? (Booba88)

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