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I presume you mean the shopkeeper / whoever is rich and the customer isn't. It's a bit more ambiguous than you probably intended. Great poem. I'm just not sure about the last two lines.
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Yes, it could very well mean the shopkeeper or the checkout operater, or even the customer, but then again it would depend upon how other people wish to interpret my poem. How ever I was a bit unsure about the last line. Thanks Carl I will think on this one,Debbie.
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