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Customer Circuit! a poem

By debbie reynolds | Posted: 19 October 2008

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No buying back, no sample pack,
No second chance, settle for less,
No guarantee, no entitlement,
No trial period, no refund,
No chance to retrieve, no credit given,
No change given, it's down to discretion,
Then it's lucky I'm rich,
and you're not!

by Debbie Reynolds
All articles on this website by debbie reynolds are copyright ©debbie reynolds and should not be reproduced without the author's prior written consent. All opinions are the opinions of their respective authors and are not necessarily the opinions of The Writers' Circle.
Comments 
Carl
20 October 2008
I presume you mean the shopkeeper / whoever is rich and the customer isn't. It's a bit more ambiguous than you probably intended. Great poem. I'm just not sure about the last two lines.
debbie reynolds
20 October 2008
Yes, it could very well mean the shopkeeper or the checkout operater, or even the customer, but then again it would depend upon how other people wish to interpret my poem.  How ever I was a bit unsure about the last line. Thanks Carl I will think on this one,Debbie.

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Hiya all, it's great to be joining you all in the circle. Yes I do have Dyslexia, I have a loving family too. I have had Three poem's published so far. I continue to write stories, poems, notes and scribbles ... (Read more)
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