Distance by Evita Sagalongos

How far can we bear 
Living without each other's side 
How strong is our love 
To surpass all of the impediments

It is hard to pretend 
That everything remains fine 
When time fastly flies 
And we were left waiting for a chance

There must be a way
To make our lives joyful each day  
I don't want to give up 
And I hope you will do your part

We have been praying
To God we never lose our faith 
Perhaps He is just preparing 
For the finest moment to fulfill our fate

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Comments

taylorswift97

25 January 2010

Really intense emotion in this. I really enjoyes reading it.

taylorswift97

25 January 2010

Oops, made a little typo. I meant to say "I really enjoyed reading this."

m n m n I

25 January 2010

I feel your pain here, Evita
Your writing comes from the heart

Grampa Pogi

26 January 2010

Evita,

Faith, Love, Joy, Prayer, Hope and Friendship. Your poem has all the right ingredients and if God is with you, how can you lose?

Grampa

Evita Sagalongos

26 January 2010

Grampa Pogi, 

Thank you for the encouragement.  Your remarks is giving me more strength. 

MnmnI and taylorswift97

Thank you for appreciating my poem.

Evita Sagalongos

26 January 2010

I meant "remark" not "remarks".  sorry for the error.  =)

debbie reynolds

27 January 2010

The meaning of life!

Also see: The conflict between dreams and family (iram 24) • The Best Laid Schemes (iram 24) • A Man After God's Own Heart (lloydbyron) • Sidewalks...Puke! (bobchoi) • Sidewalks.....always underfoot! (unbridledspirit) • this is what i've become (wolfeyesofgoldenrays) • In Response to: February Writing CLub (audreyhepburn) • Sidewalks : A reply to audreyhepburn's "FEBRUARY WRITING CLUB!" (taylorswift97) • ~Dark Soul~ (Dark Angel) • Damaged (Dark Angel)

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Writer Evita Sagalongos	Total posts: 206
Roles: Writer

Manila, PHILIPPINES

I started writing and get published since I was 19 but my work are business in nature (business articles, industry and country reports) but I thought of joining this circle because I want to try something ... (Read more)

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