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There's something extremely likeable about your writing style.
You obviously aren't the best speller in the world! Nonetheless I still like it.
Maybe it should read:
Most people look at the rain and say 'oh, what a miserable day.'
Have you ever smelt the rain and noticed when the winds change?
Sometimes when the rain falls it's warm like a lukewarm pool
and then sometimes it's cold like when you open the freezer door.
As you feel the dampness all around you, look up to see the clouds.
The rain comes and sometimes it goes just like opening and closing
the door. As you wait to feel it upon your skin from your ear to your chin,
as it trickles down your neck, you get a feeling that you're all wet.
Sometimes you run to find a dry place and sometimes you walk
to let the rain slide down your face, through your clothes,
till you feel that you are soaked.
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