Humanity and Humane Things by laughingkat27

Since when did humanity care to think
About those left bereft
In its progression?

Now we sprawl across the world
As lazy as an old cat
And half as lifeless

If just once we worked as hard
Saving the world
As we do harming it

Would we save
This beautiful place
Before it goes to waste?

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taylorswift97

31 January 2010

Hi laughingkat! 
This has a good message to it, but for some reason, the words didn't reach out to me. I'm not really sure why...

laughingkat27

31 January 2010

Probably because I'm not very good at poetry. It's not my strongest point... Just thought I'd have a go.

debbie reynolds

31 January 2010

I am sorry but I have to say that I sensed ANGER in this poem, although it did get your message across.

laughingkat27

31 January 2010

Why are you sorry to say that? I don't understand.

debbie reynolds

31 January 2010

It breaks my heart when I have to say what I think may hurt the person who would have taken time and trouble to have written  an article. God Bless.

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