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Summer days

By taylorswift97 | Posted: 31 January 2010

Views: 190
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Summer Days

Lying on the green grass
Watching the clouds float by 
Looking at the birds
Fluttering across the sky

Walking across the shore
The waves crash against the sand
The wind blows through your hair
Your lover gently holds your hand

Dreaming about the days to come
Sitting on a bench in the park 
Being kissed by the sun 
As happy children run 

Laughing and smiling 
On a swing with a friend
Hoping together
That these sweet summer days won't end
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Comments 
audreyhepburn
31 January 2010
I really like this one.
Audrey
unbridledspirit
31 January 2010
Taylor...I really like this.  I think all of your verses are great.  I do see one verse where the rhythm and flow is slightly off.  Could I be so bold as to make a suggestion?  In verse 2, changing the 2nd and 3rd lines to read:  "Wind blowing through my hair... My lover gently holding my hand".  I think it improves the rhythm and personalizes it more too.  Thanks for indulging me.
taylorswift97
01 February 2010
thanks audrey, and thanks unbridledspirit for your suggestion! I will definetly fix that.

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