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I loved every word of this poem. In a way its sweet and gently becuase you talk about the moon and peace but then there's sudden thunder and lightening. I loved this line, 'As if angels are bowling up above' very inventive.
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I'm not sure I agree with the above. I like the rest of the poem, the flashing lightning and so on, but the image of the angels bowling jars a little with the rest of it.
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Another good one!
Audrey
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Really felt the storm your words using angels bowling and rain drums; are great expresions to emphasise the storm
a little puzzled at the last three lines sleeping through the storm
mature gent
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