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LoL this is really funny :)
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Thanks =)
It was actually really fun to write =)
Audrey
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This is a masterpiece, Audrey
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girl, i hear you here! exs are hard to be rid of!lol my ex is on my fans..lol. hearts heal with time and grace.! superb job !
wolfy
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Thanks...
Wolfy, this actually wasn't based on something that has happened to me- but it was fun to write =)
Audrey
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Really a great imagination, audrey. Hope it wont happen to you
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Me too : )
Audrey
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It made me smile! love your attitude
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Thanks =P
Audrey
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Awesome! I think this is your best yet! Keep it up and you'll be published in no time!
Always keep writing. ;D ~Dragonwriter
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Very good! You build up the tension really well, as you move from the possible to the actual and the poem is suddenly about confrontation and betrayal. This is really well done in how private feelings are played out in the public space of the mall.
Kudos!
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Thanks!
Audrey
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Great job audrey! Is that based on an expereance of somesort?
Anonymous :)
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No, Anonymous, it is not. You must not have read the note:
"This is a joke piece"
or read the comments.
Bye!
Audrey
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Not funny to me but excellent all the same. It had a real kick, especially the last few lines.
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