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Hi Possum,
This is beautiful. Sad, but beautiful. You don't have to be looking for love in all the wrong places . . . 'love is always in your heart'. Well said.
Though you haven't profiled yourself yet . . . here we go, 'Possum', hmmm, 'Australia' . . . 'Mount Schoenstatt' . . . (fire up Google) . . . ahh, New South Wales . . . definitely 'Australia'. :-)
Welcome to the circle. You'll like it here. You don't have to 'look around no more' . . . ;-)
Grampa Pogi
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I love this poem
Reminds me of someone I know
It just flows
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Thanks for your comment, Grampa Pogi.
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Highly appreciated your comment, m n m n l.
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Good!
Welcome to the Circle!
Looking forward to reading more- and some comments too!
Audrey
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Thanks, audreyhepburn.
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Welcome, possum
I like your poem
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Possum, I love your poem. Think I could relate to this. God loves you so much. Have faith, always, for you will never be alone. He is always looking after for you. From libran88
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Possum, I like your poem. Listen with your heart and love is always there for you. Someone is looking after you all the time.
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We never walk alone for with every step that we make, God is with us. Thanks, libran88.
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I believe in love, I believe in God through all eternity. Thanks, Anonymous.
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Just reread
I'd bet it's reality
That's what I felt
Just want to know
why you "spent the day looking for love"
why you had a "bleeding heart"
why you're "weeping openly"
I like the lesson of love in the end
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This poem was based on true facts. Every line was written the way it happened. And yes, the miracle was real. Thanks, mnmnI.
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I like the last line...but the rest is just charming...
^_^
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Thanks, Shakespril. This poem was based on a true story, so I decided not to alter anything at all. Everything was real, from the first line to the last line. A miracle!!!
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We like this poem very much. We've been to Mt Schoenstatt. The shrine is peaceful and known for miracles.
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Thank you for your comment, JC1331.
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