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Hey mnmnl, I liked this one. Either your stuff is getting better, or I am now starting to understand it. (poetry normally leaves me cold) I thought that this poem skipped along quite nicely.
cute.
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A reassurance of my love
Thanks for your comment, churchmouse
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M n m n I,
Wow, I had to double check if it was you. To add to Churchmouse's comment, this piece is closer to my perception. Your previous postings were quite deeper and you being a poet extraordinaire, it is sometimes rather difficult to wear your shoes and get into your imaginative concepts. However, this one is on a level closer to my reality :-). It's excellent.
Btw, after reading Possum's' Where Love is . . .", you come up with "Who Love is". I can't wait for the next one . . . "What Love is . . ." :-)
Grampa
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Well
I guess love is easier to say
And we think we understand it
What is love?
That's harder to answer
and to write a poem about
Thanks for the comment, Grampa Pogi
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Another poem, the third in a row, I think, I really enjoyed and which repays several readings. This poem reads like a rapture, a homily, wholly embracing the idea that love is-in-and-of-itself, all-embracing.
I liked your use of the 'guiding star', as a symbol of faith, whether in someone or something, it is enduringly powerful.
Looking forward to reading more of your writing in the coming weeks!
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Thanks again for your insight, Keiron
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I like this one. Your love is the light that guides and the energy that picks you up. Lucky you!
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I like this one. Your love is the light that guides you and the energy that picks you up. Lucky you!!!
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This is an excellent poem, full of analogy yet right descriptions. I hope your answer to your questions is yes and that you are experiencing them.
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The poem was the answer to the question
"Do you really really love me?"
It answered the question with a question (or questions) and with "You bet . . ."
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I bet she truly loves you.
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You bet, possum
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The title speaks for itself...
^_^
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