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Beautiful straight-from-the-heart poem that melts my knees, possum
Some guy's lucky to have you as first lady
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Thank you, m n m n I. So dream the dream, believe in your dream, so you can embrace your dream soonest.
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A dreamer undergoes a moment of clarity that we know from the last verse and the wisdoms contained within, no less reveals a life-changing life-lesson so profound they feel the need to share it with everyone.
It reminds me slightly of the psalms in the bible (though I do not know a single one well enough to quote as example here), and how through similiar short verses they lead the reader towards a revelation or a certain truth of life.
A powerful idea and message captured well in this uplifting poem!
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Possum,
If I hadn't known you're out there in NSW, Australia and M n m n I, freezing with his boxers (I mean the dogs :-) in Long Island, NY, I'd probably say there's something brewing between M & P for Valentines ;-) Ha!
This uplifting piece just spews forth forcefully from your heart and whoever catches it (I think M n m n I, did already :-) would embrace and cherish it deeply to be part of your dream.
Good stuff.
Grampa
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love this one it brought warmth to my heart,we all need dreams like this.
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Any dreamer will say how awesome it is to capture and embrace one's dream. Heaven! Thanks, Keiron.
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It's freezing in NY, so I'll just stay here in Sydney with my dreams. Thanks, Grampa.
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I'm so glad that my poem brought warmth to your heart. Thanks, Debbie.
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Possum, somebody out there is a very lucky guy to have you as his First Lady. I think you are really a very Special Lady who speaks from her heart. You are so inspiring! From libran88
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Possum, I think your lucky guy knows that you are his First Lady so dream the dream and believe in it.
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I always say, dream the dream, believe in it, and embrace it when the time comes. Thanks, libran88.
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Thanks, Anonymous.
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I remember my dream last night...Well, I do not believe in that dream but this poem made me think twice...
^_^
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Just dream the dream, Shakespril. You're very good writer. You'll definitely hit a mark in this world.
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