The Dream

The Dream

By Possum [134]

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when i was young i had this dream
i'd be the first lady of the land
but so many years have passed and gone
and i'm still not one.

so when the other night i had this dream
i'd be the first lady of the land
i sprung up and wondered
when i would ever be.

then suddenly i realised this dream is really true
for i have always been the first lady
who's deeply loved and cherished
in the kingdom of his heart.

so dream the dream, believe in it
let it flow into your life
let it take you to the magic place
where you can embrace your dream.

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Comments, critiques and replies

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Beautiful straight-from-the-heart poem that melts my knees, possum
Some guy's lucky to have you as first lady
m n m n I [304]05/02/2010
Thank you, m n m n I.  So dream the dream, believe in your dream, so you can embrace your dream soonest.
Possum [134]05/02/2010
A dreamer undergoes a moment of clarity that we know from the last verse and the wisdoms contained within,
no less reveals a life-changing life-lesson so profound they feel the need to share it with everyone.

It reminds me slightly of the psalms in the bible (though I do not know a single one well enough to quote
as example here), and how through similiar short verses they lead the reader towards a revelation or a
certain truth of life. 
A powerful idea and message captured well in this uplifting poem!
Keiron [38]05/02/2010
Possum,

If I hadn't known you're out there in NSW, Australia and M n m n I, freezing with his boxers (I mean the
dogs :-) in Long Island, NY, I'd probably say there's something brewing between M & P for Valentines
;-) Ha!

This uplifting piece just spews forth forcefully from your heart and whoever catches it (I think M n m
n I, did already :-) would embrace and cherish it deeply to be part of your dream.

Good stuff.

Grampa
Grampa Pogi [510]06/02/2010
love this one it brought warmth to my heart,we all need dreams like this.
debbie reynolds [320]06/02/2010
Any dreamer will say how awesome it is to capture and embrace one's dream.  Heaven!  Thanks, Keiron.
Possum [134]10/02/2010
It's freezing in NY, so I'll just stay here in Sydney with my dreams.  Thanks, Grampa.
Possum [134]10/02/2010
I'm so glad that my poem brought warmth to your heart.  Thanks, Debbie.
Possum [134]10/02/2010
Possum, somebody out there is a very lucky guy to have you as his First Lady.  I think you are really
a very Special Lady who speaks from her heart.  You are so inspiring!  From libran88
libran88 [28]12/02/2010
Possum, I think your lucky guy knows that you are his First Lady so dream the dream and believe in it.
Anonymous [95]13/02/2010
I always say, dream the dream, believe in it, and embrace it when the time comes.  Thanks, libran88.
Possum [134]13/02/2010
Thanks, Anonymous.
Possum [134]13/02/2010
I remember my dream last night...Well, I do not believe in that dream but this poem made me think twice...


^_^
Shakespril [127]16/03/2010

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