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I
I of semantics, you of bricks
Grammar, mortar, notre idée fixe
Fourteen lines in a sonnet, four walls, front door
In these fundamental foundations there's surely a flaw;
For consistency's stability, do not overlook
The power of incongruity, a pattern shook
The sub-conscious spewing into forms unrecognised
A framework so abrupt but delicate in size
Twisting and turning, stayed by foundations: my discourse
Linear precision, stark contrast, yet still a rapport.
For you the two arts are one and the same
A reflective respite in the same refrain.
II
A rose painted in stained red words
Colours, senses conjured, a blurb.
A scripture on the beauty of nature,
A compliment to your flowing walls:
Bound boundlessly,
Meant not without
Care, endlessly
Spent so devout
See scarlet fire, call itself from the shimmering pond, that rose
Reflected in the window of:
A house
A chateau
A castle of prose.
III
The obstinate forbears of the art: so shrewd
Would frown on your creation,
Yet what green they scorn
Your perfection of an art
So perfectly formed.
A purpose, or none?
Dull, or beauty, aesthete?
Should artists hold scholars, academics at their feet?
For the latter take the literal; reality, after a fashion,
But to love true reality transcends even passion
The heat of emotion, its buoyancy higher
Does rise from the cold, clammy, factual mire.
For the feeling required to express; expression proper
Needs more than brain: needs flowing heart, no stopper.
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