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Why I love you

By Evita Sagalongos | Posted: 14 February 2010

Views: 202
I don't need to be Ms. Universe 
I don't need to be Bill Gates' daughter 
I don't need to have superb accomplishments
I just need to be me 
And thank you for loving me whole heartedly 
And most importantly 
I don't need to be screened 
By your beloved parents 
And I thank you 
For making love easier for me
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Comments 
Grampa Pogi
16 February 2010
Hi Evita,

You don't need to pretend to be something else . . . just be yourself and you'll find your *future* in-laws and your beloved would make love easier for you.

But imagine you're *Ms. Universe* too? Bill Gates himself would come to you :-)

This is a nice poem with multiple messages.

Grampa
m n m n I
16 February 2010
You don't need to be, Evita
( : but it would be nice : )
He loves you no matter what
I like this poem
Evita Sagalongos
17 February 2010
Grampa Pogi, 

Bill Gates would come to me? Actually I could have met him few years back if I was allowed to cover overseas, but company was low :-)  

I never pretended, that's probably the reason why I am always screened :-) Luckily, it seems I wont be encountering such problem with my current, and i am happy about it =)
Evita Sagalongos
17 February 2010
I meant "company budget is low"...

To mnmnI

Yes, I also wish I am =) But it's fine, I am contented with what God gave me.  Thanks for appreciating the poem.
stargazer
21 February 2010
There is so much in this poem and what one sees is based on each individuals life experiences. From my experiences, finding the person who will give us unconditional love is truly one of life's greatest riches. :) It sounds like you're experiencing this emotion. Freeing, isn't it? stargazer
taylorswift97
22 February 2010
This small poem holds so much in its words. So many emotions, so many thoughts, so much expression put together to create something more. Great job. 

Taylorswift97
Evita Sagalongos
22 February 2010
Stargazer, you are perfectly right, it's freeing and i know you that you know when you are loved unconditionally, you simply can't ask for more.
Evita Sagalongos
22 February 2010
I mean "I know that you know..." =) Taylorswift, it is always my pleasure to write poems that you can enjoy.

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