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I feel it mnmnl, must be getting near to springtime. I don't normally comment on poetry, but I liked this. Simple, straightforward and with real meaning.
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Thanks churchmmouse
Never thought I'd need the Internet Shed
Been out of commission
Internet down
I couldn't even give you a shout out
Been having snow storms lately and now
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Nice!
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Thanks Grampa Pogi
How's the snow in Scarborough treating you?
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You're welcome MnmnI,
Snow wasn't too great this year (knock on head), it was mostly the cold air and lately, it hovered around the "oh, I could handle it" temperature. I heard there were more of the fluffy stuff around Washington DC than up north. Obama was considering moving the White House to Hawai'i and possibly *renaming* it to another type of house. Apparently, he hated living in an igloo. :-)
Grampa
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A hearwarming poem, must be red by all.
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Let me rephrase the song...
"it started from walking home
with words left unspoken
it's funny how a simple kiss
the best things begin..."
How's that for a change?
Good one, right?
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You took the words out of my mouth, possum
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Mnmn1, a wonderful love song... soothing, uplifting... bravo!
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Thank you for the compliment, bobchoi
Love's arrow pierces our hearts with a song
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I think I'm starting to like the song. I won't alter the first part but I'll make some changes on the second one to make it more real
"I finally found someone
who knocks me off my feet
I finally found the one
who makes me feel complete.
It started from walking home
with words left unspoken
It's funny how from a simple glance
the best things began..."
That's better. It's more real. And now I can imagine the time when my addiction for sweets began. Yum.
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I love that song!
^_^
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Lovely ...
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