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Who knows what dirty thoughts in the minds of churchmice . . .
I'm sure it came naturally, churchmouse
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I went to a wet beaver discussion group once; they wanted to find out the best soap to use.
So we all sat down and had a mass debate about it.
Excellent Quality once more Churchmouse.
giving us some stiff competition on here I see.
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I learned a lot of animal kinds because of this story, but i have one note, young lad seems to be redundant since lad means young man =) just my one cent.
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A good first draft I would say.
Hope you don't mind my saying that this needs more work. Now, it looks like a few suggestive paragraphs about some animal characters were put together to make this story.
It is a funny read though and has some punchy party lines.
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Chrissyjo, Evita. Perhaps I should explain. This is not a story about animals, it is actually a piece in support of mnmnl's article on readability. The title is Double entendre, which means double meaning. The piece therefore can be read in two different ways, either as a very simple children's story about old ladies, nuns and animals or as an adult comic piece about sex. Most of the words and phrases have two completely different meanings.
If you read Festerocious's comment you will find a double entendre in there as well.
I take your point Evita about Young Lad, but I left it that way as in England a teenager is more likely to be referred to as a young lad, whereas a lad could include a man up to middle age.
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I see Churchmouse, but the dictionary says lad is a young man, so you mean the dictionary is wrong? If young lad is used in England then probably it is not used in other places on earth. I hope you know what I mean.
Actually someone with dirty mind would really think that you are talking about sex, but I chose to think that you mean otherwise.
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HI Evita, I'm afraid that in England a young lad does actually denote a teenager and a lad can be older. I think that you are right that this is not the case anywhere else in the world.
I am also sorry to upset you, but this piece is about sex, which is why it was flagged "Contains mature/sexual references.
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I see, ok, I would like to read it again so I can change my comment but would rather not to talk about it =) I guess this is always the case for women, and men seems to have more liberty to talk about sex.
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I mean "men seem..."
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Evita, here in Australia, a young lad is a young man. And double entendre is a word or phrase with two different meanings. So there's nothing wrong if you understood Churchmouse's work differently from the rest. That's normal.
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Hi Churchmouse,
Oh boy, am I glad I got my internet back. It's so much faster now with fiber optics from Bell Internet. I had to give up the greedy Rogers but I misjudged the day of cancellation that when I requested to stop service effective the 18th, I thought they'd give me till the evening of the 18th (greedy bastards) and Bell installs on the 19th (and just finished "hooking" up a few minutes ago). I missed all the excitement of your intercourse about the animals.
I have a sneaky tight feeling who gave you a prude (prudent?) kudo of 'nut so good' :-)
I for one can attest to the fact that in Canada, where the temperature gets hairy, that a nice warm beaver could be welcomed as pure happiness, like a warm gun (if you're a hunter . . . well, just ask the famous hunter Mike Hunt).
As well, a magnificent cock if Barbie cued may brighten a Caribbean's heart if served spicy and "jerked". Of course, if you haven't "jerked" a chicken leg, which could be smooth and easy to spread, you must've just fried it; a rather boring FCK way . . . fried chicken of Kentucky.
Jugs of milk will also do well and help push that fried cock or "jerked" chicken, or Barbie cued (whichever your preference is) - but in some areas, young lads would prefer Mary Brown's chicks 'cause she has the best legs in town. In some cases, Wendy's hot and juicy would be preferred and eaten by those young lads . . . or even young-dreaming old lads like myself.
Another Churchmouse classic . . .
. . . and if this was ebay, A+
:-)
Grampa
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Hi possum,
Yes I checked it, it says here (farlex dic.) if lad is used in informal way it means "a man of any age" if used in a formal way, then it means "a boy or young man"
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This proves that one can be erotic and funny at the same time. Thanks, Churchmouse! There might still be some hope for me.
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Of course Bobchoi, you have hopes, don't you know that you are one of my favorite writers in WC? You just probably need to be exposed so much in eroticism. I am wondering, though, why it's the one you like to write about =)
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Well, Evita, why is the grass always greener on the other side?
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Because the other side receives more sunlight than the other. (photosynthesis). Is this what you are trying to ask me? =)
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