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I'll have a read and let you know how I get on. Cheers
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Thanks Stargazer. I have had a read like you suggested. Your writing is super and you have put in a lot of hard work into this. Quite comendable. Tone things down a bit, ie give a little more space to let the prose flow before each new erotic encounter. I'd like to see you challenge you characters a bit more that you are doing at present. From the way you write, I have the feeling you can do that very well.
Good luck!
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