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Hi there,
Although this was a short poem, you got the message across quite well. Great!
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Thank you taylorswift97, I know you understand such poem, you are completely aware of many issues despite being young.
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Evita, sometimes a person uses words that you as the recipient considers negative. But have you thought otherwise that he deeply cares for you and just wants you to reach your vision with him? Probably, he just wants either of you to win the writing competition. So, just let it be for the time being, everything will turn out right.
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Possum, I don't know if we are talking about the same person but in case you are right, that is a pleasant surprise.
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Honestly, I don't know whom you're referring to as the cybercriminal. What I was trying to convey to you was, sometimes people criticize your work or comment the way you understand things specially here in the writers circle. Anything that you write here is open for everybody to see. It's just a matter of having an open mind. Normally people who criticize you care for you, they don't mean any harm, so don't take it negatively. Let it be constructive to the betterment of your work. It's all up to you to listen or not. But, if I were you, I'll look at the good point. It might help you in the end. Also, we as writers have the right with our choice of words and with the character or setting we want to explore in our story or poem. They could be fictional or real, but it doesn't mean that the writer is singling out a certain race or person. We must not take that personal. Always remember that we are multinational here in the writers circle and we as writers must know for a fact that we have different styles, different tastes, different colours. That makes writing more interesting. So, just stay positive and you'll be alright.
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Possum,
I didn't say that someone here is singling out a person or race. I never said this and I think we should stop talking about grampa's latest article that talks about certain race because i never said something about it here in the circle, you can review all my comments and you will not see anything. I am actually surprised why he brought up that Nigerian thing.
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There you go again with your outburst. It's negative. You don't even know if I'm black or white but for me it doesn't matter if I'm black or white. What matters most is that I respect the writer's choice of words, his choice of character and setting. I might give a comment here and there and nothing more. And I won't take it personal if the writer criticizes my comment. So, Evita, let's put a full stop on this, and I mean it when I say full stop.
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You know Possum, you are right we should put a full stop, Actually it already had a pull stop last night. That's why I was surprised to receive a comment from you today.
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And... it doesn;t matter to me as well if you're black or white. Actually, I don't care.
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