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If I could only stop the downpour of hourglass... by Shakespril

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If I could only stop the downpour of hourglass...

By Shakespril | Posted: 23 February 2010

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Comments 
Evita Sagalongos
23 February 2010
First of all i like your call sign, it sounds like Shakespeare =) I feel the sadness in this poem.  The good news is for every man that goes, someone comes.  so cheer up =)
audreyhepburn
08 March 2010
Sad, touching.  Beautiful poem.  You use the perfect words to capture intense feelings.  

Audrey
taylorswift97
08 March 2010
This is beautiful and very touching. You are great at putting emotions into words!
Shakespril
15 March 2010
This is actually a sapphic poetry but I revised it since I am not from the Isle of Lesbos. I was inspired to write this when I happen to read the poetry of Sappho..

Grateful, I lift up all your comments with sincerity...Enjoy reading!

^_^

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