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To Grampa Pogi

By stargazer | Posted: 27 February 2010

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Your a Godsend...virtual grin.
Grammar is what I perceive as my greatest weakness. ANY and all suggestions will be embraced and put on the writing team of my ms. Please continue to peruse my writing at your leisure for errors. I especially appreciate your effort since I don't think my writing is "up your alley" in terms of literacy top ten. ;)
That makes me even more thankful for your time and effort in helping me hone my writing skills Grampa Pogi!
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Grampa Pogi
28 February 2010
Stargazer,

You're very welcome.  :-)  I too need suggestions and feedbacks; none of us could say we *got* it down pat and that's why we have to help each other. 

As well, the only way to improve is to keep a continuous *practice* of our writing skills.

I remember a simple allegory that probably originated in NY (someone asking for direction):
"Excuse me, can you tell me how I could get to Carnegie Hall?"
"Practice, lots of practice."

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