SUNSET is Death 
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Alas! The dying sun in throne
Slides down toward the horizon
Like the slumber of a baby,
At its cradle, the newborn's glee.
For death is a rebirth today;
Carpe Diem! This is the day!
Where ev'ry setting of the sun,
A star is born, the light is gone
From a distance, a tolling bell
Almost bitter curses into hell
While the moon, child of sun's death,
In Paradise lost, still regret....
Kudos 5.50 after 6 votes |
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Comments, critiques and replies
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You see things that others can't see and express them beautifully
And I can see that you are a very prolific writer and poet
I browsed through all the articles you've just submitted although I couldn't comment at this time
You have so much depth and talent and so young . . .
m n m n I | m n m n I [365] | 04/03/2010 |
Randomness! | Anonymous [107] | 08/03/2010 |
Oh! I am deeply grateful...Anyway, this is a poem about death. That is the topic I have chosen, maybe
that is all because I have lost a friend. At the same time, when our WORLLIT professor asked us to answer
the quiz, the idea popped in my head.
I am happy you appreciate this...
^_^ | Shakespril [139] | 15/03/2010 |
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