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One of the best poems I've read in the Circle
Lucid, fluid and a wholeness to it
Flows as the night flies in the poem with faith strengthening
"The surf crashes down"
She sees him in her bed but he's not there
She wishes that he's feeling what it's like to sleep without her, like she's feeling without him at that moment
She longs for him, misses him; he is the energy that gives her life
"The moon disappears"
She's thinking about finally being together with him (". . . across your pillow . . . "), romance, passion and all, in the place that's Home
for both of them ("I can no longer fly away")
"The cloud will fade"
Inevitably, it will happen and she'll be happy
"And I wonder how I ever slept, without you here."
Beautiful love . . .
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This is brilliant. Another beautiful work from you, GenieRaine.
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