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Ouch! "waiting patiently", couldn't believe you'd write about my love story. Anyway, this is beautiful, though I must say, the truth hurts. And yes, I'm still crazy in love. What can I do. Kudos!
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This poem is so personal,
I can feel the pain
but it's like too much . . .
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Thank you to all for your comments,
m n m n I ,
Of course head over heels she is so mad about him,,, high intensity and mercury rising, hehehe , thanks
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Good! The words you chose really help the readers feel the pain you are trying to express.
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oh, maybe online presence will be helpful =)
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First two stanzas were excellent. The last two needs to match those in their intensity and style. Good work.
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First two stanzas were excellent. The last two needs to match those in their intensity and style. Good work.
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Our living souls have secret feelings/ secret thoughts inside which only come out when we write poetry , etc... Thanks taylorswift
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Just trying to lighten up the mood, she has mood swing... I apprecite it Chrissiejoe thanks.
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Good job:) keep up the good work:)
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