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Miss you, love you like crazy

By lomliyavi | Posted: 04 March 2010

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Miss you, Love you like crazy

She misses his face she used to touch
Sometimes her thoughts are just blank
Eyes wide open and shut for a while
A moment with vision of his existance
His tender embrace and warm touch settles her down. 

His love letters are just few years old
It moves her like an old wooden top
Spinning on the palm of her left hand
Running through her arms straight to her heart
Sensations are exciting, cannot define the meaning.

Rotating distance irritates relationship
Days without him are blank grey years
Something missing......Newspaper without highlighted news
Playing solitaire without King of spade
But Queen of hearts patiently waiting.

Each morning her soft freckled skin is dry
His sealed marmalade kiss is her radiance 
Missing him is unbearable and difficult to hide
If in 2 nights he's still onsite and out of sight
Dear heart  just visit her at nearby mental hospital.

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Comments 
Anonymous
04 March 2010
Ouch!  "waiting patiently", couldn't believe you'd write about my love story.  Anyway, this is beautiful, though I must say, the truth hurts. And yes,  I'm still crazy in love.  What can I do.  Kudos!
m n m n I
04 March 2010
This poem is so personal,
I can feel the pain
but it's like too much . . .
lomliyavi
05 March 2010
Thank you to all for your comments,

m n m n I , 
Of course head over heels she is so mad about him,,, high intensity and mercury rising, hehehe , thanks
taylorswift97
05 March 2010
Good! The words you chose really help the readers feel the pain you are trying to express.
Evita Sagalongos
05 March 2010
oh, maybe online presence will be helpful =)
ChrissieJo
05 March 2010
First two stanzas were excellent. The last two needs to match those in their intensity and style. Good work.
ChrissieJo
05 March 2010
First two stanzas were excellent. The last two needs to match those in their intensity and style. Good work.
lomliyavi
05 March 2010
Our living souls have secret feelings/ secret thoughts inside which only come out when we write poetry , etc...   Thanks taylorswift
lomliyavi
05 March 2010
Just trying to lighten up the mood,  she has mood swing... I apprecite it Chrissiejoe thanks.
Beaner
08 March 2010
Good job:) keep up the good work:)

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