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You captured the A-Z of life quite well. Excellent work, libran!
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Life is an Alphabet Soup
And your ingredients make it feel like 'Chicken Soup for the Soul'
(I think that's a title of a book)
Good work, libran88
m n m n I
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Thank you Possum. I am glad you like it.
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Thank you mnmni for your comments.
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You're a very good writer. How can I not like your work.
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I like the Acronym poem....
^_^
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Thanks for reviewing my work, Shakespril. When I was writing this work, I was thinking of my own life. I thought it would serve as a
guide or maybe as an inspiration to a lot of people reading it.
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Bellisimo, thank you for reviewing my work. If I could explain, the reason why I used X'mas (for Christmas) was because it is an Acronym poem (and it is Alphabetically in order). With the word WE, this poem is about us (people of the world) and it is about our Life.
The exclamation point (!) was used to keep the excitement in life (Zest for life). Otherwise, I love your comments. It only shows your interest in your colleagues work.
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This is the 2nd piece I have thus far read of yours and have to say very much enjoyed. Lots to enjoy here in fact - well-worded wisdoms that seem to gel well and fit snugly into the overall A-Z structure.
Has a real sense of what I would call a 'secular...' or perhaps, 'non-religious prayer...' running throughout.
Never preachy, just fulled to brimming with well-intentioned and (let's face it) good advice - on this level working extremely well, and I think too, as prose/poem literature.
Kudos!
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Keiron, thank you for taking an interest in my work. Love your honest observation and comments. Being a more mature person, I live my life keeping this Alphabet in mind. It makes me more appreciative and thankful for what I have in my life.
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Very inspiring!
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Nice to hear from you, audreyhepburn. Thank you for reading my work. Shall we say, it can serve as a great inspirational guide to many people. Cheers!
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