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heartaches are so painful... but in the end i believe they make us all stronger....
wolfy
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hey guys..can i have your opinions?
wolfy
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Hi Wolfy!
Like all of your work, you did a good job expressing the emotions you are trying to make people feel. The only thing is that the last line sounds a bit akward. Maybe you could turn it into two lines and change it a bit. This is just an example:
The heartache of humanity
Is a never ending road
Good work on the rest of the poem!!
Taylor<3
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