How Do I Say 'Goodbye' When I Could Hardly Say 'Goodnight' by libran88

I tried my best to hold back my tears
As I struggled to smile to my friend
She waved at me with that sad look in her eyes
As if telling me, 'Goodnight but don't go yet'.

It breaks my heart to see my dearest friend
Lying in her sick bed not knowing what lies ahead
With a heavy heart I lifted my hand and waved back
Whispering "I love You" and "take care of yourself".

As I drove home, memories kept coming back to my mind
It was just a few months ago that we had our photo taken
Everyone was so happy, laughing, jumping and joking around
That would surely embarrass our kids if they could see us.

I wish I could turn back the time so we can be kids again
So innocent and unmindful of everything around us
Always dreaming and wishing for the stars
And all the beautiful things that life can offer.

As I was nearing home, reality painfully hit me back
Knowing in my heart that my best friend is very ill
As I watch her slowly becoming to be a different person
Only God Almighty has all the answers to our prayers.

I know my best friend is a real fighter and a survivor
Through all her life, she does not easily give up
But what if the inevitable happens to her
How do I say 'Goodbye' when I could hardly say 'Goodnight'?

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Comments

m n m n I

11 March 2010

I guess possum's poetry about suffering is a sequel to yours, like you said, libran88
And as poignant a poem
I can feel your fear of losing your friend
And I can sense you're closer to her -- like you've known her all your life 
My prayers

libran88

11 March 2010

You are absolutely right, mnmni and thank you for your prayers.

Possum

12 March 2010

I could feel your pain, I could feel your fear.  I reckon we're on the same boat at the moment.  It's a very sad poem but beautifully written.

Shakespril

16 March 2010

The title is beautiful itself...


^_^

libran88

16 March 2010

Thank you, Shakespril,  for reviewing my work.  I am glad you like it.

libran88

16 March 2010

I should not forget to thank you, Possum, for your comments.

Keiron

20 March 2010

Touching and poignant you take us up close and personal in this heartfelt tragedy.

Look forward to reading more of your work.

wolfeyesofgoldenrays

20 March 2010

awwwww...thats so sad. it really goes to the heart.exellent job.
wolfy

libran88

21 March 2010

Keiron, thank you for reviewing my work. I am glad you like it.

libran88

21 March 2010

Wolfy, thank you also for taking the time to review my work.

libran88

28 March 2010

Thank you for your prayers and good wishes, bellisimo.  Yes, it is a real situation and we are hoping for a miracle. We can only trust in Him.

Also see: Illusions (GenieRaine) • heart ache will never end (wolfeyesofgoldenrays) • Gift (MellyMooMar) • The Doorway (elaineh) • You Can't Tell... (Dark Angel Alice) • Hot-Air Balloon Clouds (Eilidh333) • Our Daughter (unbridledspirit) • Life is like an Alphabet (libran88) • The Rest Before Sleep (laughingkat27) • A Haiku For Easter J O Y (Grampa Pogi)

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