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You're dreaming...

By GenieRaine | Posted: 18 March 2010

Views: 198
You're not dreaming.


That's your hand in his.
That's your waist his arm is wrapped around.
That's your hair he's playing with.
That's you he's sitting across the table from.


You're not dreaming.


That's your house he's going to at 3am just because he missed you.
That's you he's kissing in the rain.
That's you he's introducing to his friends.
That's you he keeps calling every hour.


You're not dreaming.


That's him with his hand in hers.
That's him with his arm around her waist.
That's him playing with her hair.
That's him sitting across the table from her.


You're not dreaming.


That's him at her house at 3am.
That's him kissing her in the rain.
That's him introducing her to his friends.
That's him calling her every hour.


You're not dreaming,
but you wish you were.
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Comments 
Possum
18 March 2010
Hey, GenieRaine, I'm still dreaming up to this time.  Would it be perfect if I would be awaken anytime soon?  Living and enjoying each and every moment and not just dreaming the dream?  Good work!
taylorswift97
18 March 2010
This is a good poem about love & heart break. I like how things suddenly turned around.
franki
18 March 2010
i agree, it is a great poem. ;)
m n m n I
19 March 2010
That's your backhand on his face! 
You wish you weren't dreaming
Good work, GenieRaine
Grampa Pogi
19 March 2010
Hi GenieRaine,

>>> That's your house he's going to at 3am just because he missed you.
>>> That's him at her house at 3am.

This is a nice poem about love and its intricacies.  

It reminds me of Kenny Nolan's one-hit-wonder song "I like Dreaming" . . . the chorus goes like this . . .

I like dreamin' cause dreamin' can make you mine.
I like dreamin', closing my eyes and feeling fine.
When the lights go down, I'm holding you so tight.
Got you in my arms and it's paradise 'til the morning light.

Your poem is better :-)

Grampa

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