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Hey, GenieRaine, I'm still dreaming up to this time. Would it be perfect if I would be awaken anytime soon? Living and enjoying each and every moment and not just dreaming the dream? Good work!
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This is a good poem about love & heart break. I like how things suddenly turned around.
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i agree, it is a great poem. ;)
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That's your backhand on his face!
You wish you weren't dreaming
Good work, GenieRaine
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Hi GenieRaine,
>>> That's your house he's going to at 3am just because he missed you.
>>> That's him at her house at 3am.
This is a nice poem about love and its intricacies.
It reminds me of Kenny Nolan's one-hit-wonder song "I like Dreaming" . . . the chorus goes like this . . .
I like dreamin' cause dreamin' can make you mine.
I like dreamin', closing my eyes and feeling fine.
When the lights go down, I'm holding you so tight.
Got you in my arms and it's paradise 'til the morning light.
Your poem is better :-)
Grampa
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