The Writers' Circle

I'd decided to go on ahead and try this again with the story since I feel that it's better than the last time I'd post it. 
Here's an new and completely revised version of the first chapter as well as the first scene. Feel free to read, comment, make a critique, etc. 

It was about thirty minutes after the fight with Leon, when Lea was getting up after feeling woozy from the possession of Leon. Her head kept spinning, as she felt her pointy ears race and figet from the spiritual takeover. Her stomach felt pretty queasy and she felt as though she's more light-headed than before.
"What-happened? For a minute, I'd felt so-light headed and it was black for a long time. What-happened to me?" Lea's mind wasn't clear of the incident, as she had not a clue upon what happened. All she can remember is that she took over my whole body and she just...huh?" Lea turned around to see that her fiancee was sleeping right next to her, and everyone else was sitting around, waiting for her to wake up.
"Well well? Look who wakes up? Had a good nap?" Shara sounding sarcastic though somewhat happy she's okay.
"What-happened?"
"Believe or not, but your egotistical boyfriend here, saved you from her." Shara telling her the truth. Shara was the first of them to recover, since she had the poison out of her body the quickest than everybody else.
"Garbo-saved-me?" Lea surprised her fiancee really did care about him this much. 
"The others are in the recovery room. They'd gotten poisoned pretty badly and it was going through their blood stream. However, they were saved by Garbo's technique, whatever the heck he used to end it." Shara's memory not so sharp; trying to remember everything that happened.
"So..." Lea felt like she's happy to know that other people are save, but she felt like it was her fault for not telling them everything.
"This-is all my fault. I've-should've-done a better job telling you more about what's-going on?" Lea feeling guilty about this.
"If I'd would've just..."
"Don't beat yourself up. It must be hard to have something evil inside of you. I mean, I'd never would've thought it myself. However, there was something she said, that rather strike me as curious though." Shara now wants to get to the bottom of this.
"What in the world is she talking about when she said the "Incomplete MajuZorc" and possessing items? How's is this happening? Just who is he?! And about our ancestors? Who are they as well? What was Leon talking about when she said that he has no memories as the monster that he is right now?!" Shara's questions kept popping up; wanting to know more about their ancestry and their common enemy.
"(Sigh) I'll explain just as soon as everyone is back in the room. I believe this is something that everyone needs to hear and understand." Lea felt this was going to long and tough. Feeling like she's going to have to do a lot of talking.
         It was about another three hours, when suddenly the searchers Eliza and Ed were waking up from the poison. Feeling refreshed and replenished from coming out from the room.
"Wow, what-happened? One minute, we were intoxicated with poison, the next minute here we are in some kind of room and..." Eliza not understanding the severity of their situation, as Ed's head continued to spin from her talking.
"Gez, one minute and you still don't shut up. Give me a minute, not everyone can do calculus like you can." Ed's head continued to hurt some more. 
"..." Zac starting to get up and feel light headed from all the spiritual poison that was inside of his body. He looked around to see that everyone else was doing okay and it was a relief to him. But like everyone else, he wanted to know what was going on with them and why did Leon mentioned that MajuZorc was incomplete. 
"Sir, your okay...I-see." Conan was glad to see that his master was okay, at the same time he also felt that he too could feel that something is not entirely right about the situation.
"That's almost everyone. Which means..." Shara and the others were getting up and now looking at Lea, as they want to know more about this future threat that they'll be facing. Garbo continued to sleep, but they'd decided to let him sleep, while Lea were to spill everything about the whole forgotten history.
"Lea, were sorry to be all up on this, but I believe that this is something we need to know." Eliza telling her that this is something that must be known.
"Well, the thing is..."
"It's alright, it's best for me to tell this story." Someone was coming into the room with Lea's father, King Mobidian. She looked middle aged and carried a staff with her.
"Ugh, whose she?" Ed said rudely, getting another smack in the back from his sister.
"What?! I'd just asked that's all." Ed wondered why he got slapped.
" My apology, sometimes my brothers doesn't know any better sometimes and I have to keep warning him not to do that." Eliza apologizing.
" My name is AnaItako Mobia, I'm Lea's godmother and I'm also one of the Elders of the Forbidden Council, I am also the mother to my lovable Kackiya, the man that has brought you here from this point of this journey. It's my duty to tell you new generations about the old generations and the common enemy you must face to defeat him. However, I'm also hear to tell the prophacy of a boy who will save the world from the returned darkness that is coming to threaten the world. One that I must tell immediately and that he should know." AnaItako said, as she pointed to the sleepy knight-in-training. He continued to sleep, not hearing anyone else but in his own little world.
"Okay, I'll give him props for sleeping that long." Ed surprised he can sleep for long periods of time. 
"Alright, so what is it?" Eliza curious.
"..." AnaItako took her time, as she was about to explain the story immediately.