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I Love You

By Strawberry JAM | Posted: 28 March 2010

Views: 214
The moon smiles down on the couple in love,
As they lay there looking at the stars above,

She listens to his heart, every beat screams "I love you,"
She can be sure that their love is true,

He looks down at her perfect face,
He knows she is the prettiest person in the human race,

They hope that this night will never end,
She needs him, or her heart will not mend,

He looks into her deep blue eyes,
She is perfect, he thinks, then he sighs.
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Comments 
taylorswift97
09 April 2010
Hi Strawberry Jam! This is my favourite poem of yours. You were really descriptive, which gave this great imagery! I did notice that the second line in the third stanza was a bit too long, but other than that this is really good!

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Hey, I'm Jamie and I love reading and writing. I want to become a writer, TV presenter or Vet when I am older xx