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Perhaps "With grim satisfaction, she flushed her wedding ring down the toilet." ?
You raise an interesting topic. I am inspired to try playing with these spare stories in an effort to write the tightest prose I can.
Thanks for the post!
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Keiron
<< 'When he woke up the dinosaur was still there'. Top that! . . . . . .
How about
“Somebody next to you may have a gun…”
:0}D
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