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Testing Love Without Really Testing It (Short Story)

By libran88 | Posted: 03 April 2010

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After many years of hoping and waiting, my love and I would finally be reconciled.  This I thought was going to happen, until a phone call brought down my dream.

'Hello, my love, how are you?  Have you confirmed my flight booking? 
Did you make sure that I will have a wheelchair when you meet me at LAX Airport?', I asked.

Silence, more silence, deafening silence, until finally he replied, "No, I did not do any booking.  After much thought, I cannot look after you.  There is NO more you and me."

Shocked, my body trembled.  I could not breath.  I pulled myself together and gathered all my strength until finally, I was able to ask him what the problem was.

It was the WHEELCHAIR!

He thought that I was disabled; that I could no longer walk; that I could no longer look after myself; and that I would be a big problem and a big burden to him.

So what happened to our vows to each other?  What happened to 'For
better or for worse', 'For richer or for poorer', 'In sickness or in health' and 'Till death do us apart'?

Did I try to explain?  I tried my best but to no avail.
Did I feel hurt?  Yes, I did at the beginning.
Did I feel angry?  I tried not to.
Did I feel rejected?  I tried not to feel that way.

Was I bitter about it?  Yes, I was then.
Was I disappointed?  Yes, at first.

Am I OK now?  Yes, slowly, but surely.  Remember, it takes time to heal all wounds.

I think I was more thankful now than anything because it made me realized that it was NOT true love after all.  I was the only one dreaming of a life with my beloved.  My fantasy ended so sadly and I  was left picking up the pieces.

Guess what?

I still do my regular exercises, including walking, yoga, swimming and, going up and down the fifteen steps of my home, as the Doctors ordered for my 'bad knees'.

My life is a Gift from God and I love my life inspite of all its imperfections.  I did not have to look any further now.  All along, I have the never ending and unconditional love of my family who will always be here for me, 'for better or for worse', 'for richer or for poorer', 'in sickness or in health' and 'till death do us apart'.


(Dedicated to Aries7, Written by libran88, Dated 3rd April, 2010)
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Comments 
churchmouse
06 April 2010
A lot of emotion in this piece, from hurt to pride and endurance. I fear that it is a factually based article and therefore find it difficult to comment on it as a piece of writing rather than a display of feelings. Whichever way it still holds the attention and as such is an arresting piece.
libran88
07 April 2010
Churchmouse, thank you for reviewing my work.  You are right. I was actually inspired by somebody's life story to write this work.  It made me think about how some people might be lucky in love and still do not appreciate it.  Whereas, there are some people who truly love but have  to endure challenges in life that would transform them into a better person or for some, maybe not.
Keiron
09 April 2010
Undoubtedly written from the heart - melancholic and engaging.
libran88
09 April 2010
Keiron, once again, thank you for reading my work and for your warm comment.
Possum
10 April 2010
True love is unconditional.  I like the finale.  It's just like the matrimonial vow.  Excellent work!
libran88
10 April 2010
Thanks, Possum.  Yes, it sounds like the matrimonial vow.  I am glad that  you like my work.
m n m n I
10 April 2010
Very touching libran88
It was cold reality rammed so cold by a cold man who vowed for better or richer or health and not waiting for death
But she found her strength and love for life

Well done
libran88
11 April 2010
Hi, mnmnI.  Thank you for finding the time to review my work.  Your comments were really spot on!

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