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This is an excellent poem! Really, really good. One very small error: He begins too freeze should be He begins to freeze.
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Thanks Carl....much appreciated.....
I have corrected the grammatical error you pointed out (thanks)
Grammer is not my strong point!!!
xxx
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Another great poem from a very talented poet. Keep it up.
JD
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Awwww, I like this a lot :)
I'm not sure what else to say because I'm not a poet, but the flow is really nice and the images are nice and pronounced
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Such a creative take on Autumn to Winter!
I loved this alot.
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