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Autumn vs. Winter

By blackrose | Posted: 11 November 2008

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Rain. Falls from a darkened sky.
Autumn, wipes his eye because
 Winter has stolen his birthright again.
The same as last year.
Winter has presented herself too early,
so is the battle.
Autumn blows,
as he tries to keep the little time,
 he has left to reign over Mother Earth.
He fights in vain,
for Winter is too strong
and her aura too cold,
for his...lukewarmity.
He begins to freeze and back away,
arched, like a cat ready to pounce.
But his fury is no match
for Winter's scorn...
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Comments 
Carl
11 November 2008
This is an excellent poem! Really, really good. One very small error: He begins too freeze should be He begins to freeze.
blackrose
12 November 2008
Thanks Carl....much appreciated.....

I have corrected the grammatical error you pointed out (thanks)

Grammer is not my strong point!!!
xxx
JD Higginson
23 April 2009
Another great poem from a very talented poet. Keep it up.

JD
greekLaura
19 September 2009
Awwww, I like this a lot :)

I'm not sure what else to say because I'm not a poet, but the flow is really nice and the images are nice and pronounced
taylorswift97
26 January 2010
Such a creative take on Autumn to Winter! 
I loved this alot.

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