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Love You, Love You, Love You

By Possum | Posted: 06 June 2010

Views: 396
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Love You, Love You, Love You

love you, love you, love you
words you used to always say
words you said to mum everytime
love you, love you, love you.

love you, love you, love you
words we said to you everytime
words we uttered again and again
love you, love you, love you.

love you, love you, love you
words to always remember you by
words i had to say at your funeral
love you, love you, love you.

we will always love you
forever and beyond . . .
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Comments 
libran88
06 June 2010
Great poem, Possum.  Two simple words, "love you" but the message, the meaning, the effect, the feeling and the joy they bring to both the sender and the receiver say it all.
Possum
07 June 2010
Thank you, libran88.  My sister loved saying "love you, love you, love you".  She even tried saying those words in her dying bed.  Very simple words but full of emotions.
lomliyavi
07 June 2010
I am touch by this poem, because LOVE is very strong word that can conquer hearts and soul . Good work Possum.
Gnenen
09 June 2010
I couldn't contain my tears. Am deeply touched. You are an amazing writer.
Possum
13 June 2010
Thank you, lomliyavi.  You're right, love is a very strong word.  It conquers everything.  Love is eternal, and love for somebody will always be there even if the person is gone.
Possum
13 June 2010
Thank you, Gnenen, for your very kind words.  I broke down while I was reading your comments for suddenly I could hear my sister's voice saying "love you, love you, love you".

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