A forbidden love by Hannah94

The most hopeless cause
is the most burning desire.
The truth lingers in the air.
But hold your breath; 
and you are safe
Dreaming.
Figures pass you as you stare
into a future that will forever be locked.
As he turns, smiles, and steals your heart
Hollow sadness descends
upon those unprepared and 
waiting...
The world will always turn
faster than before,
and you try to run away from this moment.
The moment his eyes reveal him
and his impending destiny without you.

The dreams will fade. The waiting will stop.
But the wanting never ceases.

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Keiron

23 June 2010

A heartfelt, sincere poem - the first piece of writing I have read of yours so far - and a good one to begin with inasmuch as I thought it both stylistic and well written. 
Look forward to reading more.

Also see: These old eyes can't see you. (Festerocious) • Inspiration. (Festerocious) • The other side of town (GenieRaine) • Forgive and Forget: Forgiveness for Induced Forgetfulness. (evakaye) • Cold Hard Mattress; Cold-hearted Mistress (evakaye) • Virgin-faced (evakaye) • Lovers on the wrong track (evakaye) • Infinity (evakaye) • Juice; tastes like metal. (evakaye) • No Flavour (lomliyavi)

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