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Welcome back, francis84. This is a beautiful poem. You're right, this one is just like a song and I could feel the tempo. Great work!
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Hello, Francis 84. Welcome back. You are absolutely spot on! Writing poems is just great fun and yours is just like a song! Excellent work!
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You are right this one jaunts along nicely - fun to read and made me smile too!
Nice one.
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I like this it made me smile. It is original and fun. Well done.
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You're a natural poet
And I'm glad you're having fun writing poems
Keep on writing
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