Water by francis84

I am the thick, blue water.
Calm and peaceful.
Swimming up to the sandy shores,
and being splashed upon so blissful.

As I wonder into the endless ocean,
I get drained into a cloud.
Falling as rain as water again,
I'll fall as drinking water, proud.

I'll be reused and reused again,
Even when I die, I'll be useful then.

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libran88

07 July 2010

Excellent work, Francis84!  This is so original and so truthful. I love your style. Keep on writing.

m n m n I

23 July 2010

Francis, you describe water and the water cycle like a personal experience

Well done

Possum

30 July 2010

Kudos, francis84.  Keep on writing.  Your poems are really good.

francis84

10 August 2010

oh yay! 1st in the comp! that didn't matter though, i just wanted to thank all the people who voted... even the "not so good"s for some reason... >.> i really wrote this poem to share my thoughts and to use the "water cycle" as the human lifetime. my english teacher liked so i thought you guys would :) thank you!

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Writer francis84	Total posts: 14
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Sydney, AUSTRALIA

i am a boy. its been a while e.e i procrastinate badly, exams then my bro's vacation, halloween, lifesaving (swimming) and now christmas! ill fit at least three poems hopefully before then. i just read ... (Read more)

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