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The Egg's Way

By m n m n I | Posted: 14 July 2010

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The Egg's Way

In the beginning was The Egg 
Cosmic and Supreme
And The Egg created the light, the heavens and the earth
The days were long    And the days were years
And The Egg was alone and lonely
One day The Egg said: 
"Let there be eggs in my basic image!"
And there were eggs    The eggs reigned supreme
Single-celled organisms roaming free 
Like the amoeba shapeless as water 
Not needing the confines of a shell

And the days were long    And the days were years
And all the days    The eggs were in business
Of mitosis and cytokinesis 
And in the process    The inevitable
More complex multi-celled organisms 
Yearned to thrive 
One biblical day, The Egg said: 
"Let there be chicken!
Let the chicken be a hen!" 
And there was chicken. 

And the chicken was a hen 
That would bear the shell for the egg
As the egg could no longer roam free
To perform the functions
Of mitosis and cytokinesis 
For a more complex organism as the chicken
Still there was something missing . . .

And the days were long      And the days were years
And to make another egg - 
Yolk, white, shell and rigamarole -
Was too much work for the hen alone
Not much pleasure in the task
No love and appreciation 
So The Egg made the cocky rooster
To help out, give love and pleasure
And the rooster was the best egg the hen ever laid 
And the egg, hen and rooster 
All lived happily ever after . . .

One dark day, a doubting chicken asked in prayer
"Lord Egg, who is thy mother, the Hen?"
Lightning streaked   Criss-crossed the dark
And The Egg thundered
"The Egg is the beginning and the end
The hen is just The Egg's way to make another egg."



This poem is my comment to today's article (see link below) about the discovery by British scientists that " . . . a protein found only in a chicken's ovaries is necessary for the formation of the egg" and that "the egg can therefore only exist if it has been created inside a chicken" - - claiming the definitive answer in the chicken-and-egg riddle;  when all they've proven is that the chicken is just the egg's way to make another egg.

http://www.msnbc.msn.com/id/38238685/ns/technology_and_science-science/?Gt1=43001
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Comments 
churchmouse
14 July 2010
Hey mnmnI. good to see you producing again. I liked this one, possibly because to me it was more logical, I also liked the line: and the days were long and the days were years. I thought it very melodic.
You still have your magical touch. Good stuff.
m n m n I
14 July 2010
Thank you for the comment and the kudos, churchmouse
It's a poem bursting to be released
Grampa Pogi
17 July 2010
Very enjoyable read MnmnI. While reading it, I kept jumping to the conclusion that you will end it with a 'who came first, the chicken or the egg'? query and answer it with 'no, the rooster came first' [nudge, nudge] . . .  and as always, Grampa's always gutter-brained :-)
Then reading the last paragraph that I realized it was a semi-serious topic . . . well, I guess the yolks on me :-)
Grampa
Possum
17 July 2010
"To help out, give love and pleasure" ... quite narcissistic I would say but the poem was written nicely and for that I'll give you my kudos.  Welcome back, m n m n I
m n m n I
17 July 2010
You got it right the first time, Grampa Pogi
The rooster came first as always, darn! : 0{D
Thanks for the comment . . .
m n m n I
17 July 2010
"To help out, give love and pleasure"
A cocky rooster?
That's the perfect partner!
 I don't know what's narcissistic about it, possum
m n m n I
17 July 2010
Hmmmm
If you really think about it, with this discovery by the British scientists
we'll all be hatched from eggs
No more test tube babies! : 0{D

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