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Hey mnmnI. good to see you producing again. I liked this one, possibly because to me it was more logical, I also liked the line: and the days were long and the days were years. I thought it very melodic.
You still have your magical touch. Good stuff.
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Thank you for the comment and the kudos, churchmouse
It's a poem bursting to be released
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Very enjoyable read MnmnI. While reading it, I kept jumping to the conclusion that you will end it with a 'who came first, the chicken or the egg'? query and answer it with 'no, the rooster came first' [nudge, nudge] . . . and as always, Grampa's always gutter-brained :-)
Then reading the last paragraph that I realized it was a semi-serious topic . . . well, I guess the yolks on me :-)
Grampa
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"To help out, give love and pleasure" ... quite narcissistic I would say but the poem was written nicely and for that I'll give you my kudos. Welcome back, m n m n I
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You got it right the first time, Grampa Pogi
The rooster came first as always, darn! : 0{D
Thanks for the comment . . .
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"To help out, give love and pleasure"
A cocky rooster?
That's the perfect partner!
I don't know what's narcissistic about it, possum
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Hmmmm
If you really think about it, with this discovery by the British scientists
we'll all be hatched from eggs
No more test tube babies! : 0{D
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