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Good metaphor - neat and tidy rhymes with good rhythm - well done.
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I think that this poem is fantastic!
Keep writing- and good luck in the compition!
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Thank you poppy101 and Anonymous!
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On some days, work feels like this.
Well written
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Well Done, this is really good. I love the way you've written this.
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