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I've been given a low score but no reason why?
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Don't worry about the low score. The people that give them never bother to leave a comment. It may be jealousy, spite or mischief, but whatever, it's not worth getting twisted out of shape over it.
Anyway, for what it's worth I thought that your poem was OK marred only by the fact that as with 90% of poetry it's about what the poet's emotions were at the time of writing. - which is why I try not to comment on much poetry. If you can broaden the subject base, you may find that your writing will become richer. Check out some of the other poets on the site mnmnl, Aldice, Elkapan,chrissyjo are all pretty good, and they may give you some ideas of different styles and approaches.
Welcome to the circle.
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