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This Heart

By Rickyban | Posted: 29 August 2010

Views: 245
Bad language
Bad language
This heart, this dent
From exorbing your cent
To much spent
And endlessly lent
This heart, this vent
No air, it went
Mentally hell-bent
In heavenly decent
This heart, the fragment
Time to repent
But to what extent
How much absent
With cruel comment
This heart, this torment
Not content
With blind consent
There's no blueprint gent
In this heart, this excrement
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Festerocious
06 September 2010
Richard,

I like this one.
I wont ask how hard it was to finish every line with a "t", but well done all the same.

What was the inspiration for this???
Rickyban
06 September 2010
Thank Festerocious
A bad relationship was the inspiration. Oh, and some beer.
Yeah i played with it for a few days, i wanted it to read like bullet points.

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