Forbidden Faces by Rickyban

I'm waiting for someone
A forever hidden face
In an endless crowd
In a faceless place

Deep, dark and cool
The face stays hidden
Out of reach in mind
Forever to me forbidden

Searching the mass of endless identity
Opening doors to old places
Reaching out to secret light
Being passed by hidden faces

Holding on, wasted waiting
Picking the corners of my sight
Will i ever meet you
In this black and faceless night

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Festerocious

06 September 2010

Richard.

Think there might be a type on line 3. (Growd or Crowd).

I like the first two verses very much, but for me the tempo changes on the last two verses and I lose it.

It might just be me, poetry isn't an area I usually go.

Rickyban

06 September 2010

Hi Festerocious
Yeah i lost the plot a bit. 
I had a small story but it was to complicated portray.
The original, but i kept re-writing...

I'm searching the mass for your identity
Opening doors to unknown places
Reaching out for the light
while Being passed by hidden faces

Holding on, tired, wasted 
Picking the corners of my sight
Will i ever meet you
In this black and faceless night

Also see: This Heart (Rickyban) • Hope (Dark Angel) • Abused (Dark Angel) • Broken Sparrow (Dark Angel) • Dead Romance (Dark Angel) • Dust (Elkapan) • wings (wolfeyesofgoldenrays) • Don't (difficulty) • What I Need (difficulty) • True (Dark Angel Alice)

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Hi My name is Richard, i am 39. I am an IT manager for a living but have found a love for writing. I love reading and have always wanted to try writing but never found the time before. I am really ... (Read more)

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