The Writers' Circle

Hi everyone. I'm new (obviously).
Looking forward to reading some work that you have poster. And also looking forward to recieving feedback for some of mine!

Please read the opening for a novel I've planned/started. Hopefully, in between university work and sleep, I'll write some more and add to it. Until then, I'd appreciate hearing what people think of it so far and what they'd like to see it evolve into.

:)