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Chapter Three - Happiness and Tragedy

By Lentonator2011 | Posted: 17 December 2010

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Sexual references
Sexual references
Chapter Three - Happiness and Tragedy

Amy and Tom were walking home, when Tom stopped and got out his house keys, when they reached Tom's house, Tom unlocked the front door and politely asked Amy if she wanted to come in for a cup of tea, Amy said "That would be so nice", then Amy went into Tom's house. Tom put the kettle on in the kitchen and grabbed two cups, put a teabag in both cups, spooned the sugar from the sugar bowl in the two cups and poured the milk into both the cups, then he poured the boiling hot water into both the cups,  strained both the teabags and stirred them, he then brought them into the front room where Amy was sitting. "Thank you, Tom", complimented Amy and then Amy and Tom started to drink their hot cups of tea. "Tom", Amy questioned "what is it, Amy", replied Tom, "I have a proposition to make", hesitated Amy. Tom looked clueless at this point, "How about you and me go on a date, say tomorrow, 7pm", said Amy, "Yeah, sure, why not", answered Tom. Tom was delighted with the news that Amy had asked him out on a date, but within seconds, the doorbell rang, "Hello?", "Who's there", shouted Tom, "Its The Archives here, ready and waiting for your reason of why you want this job", said the man at the door, "Sorry, i'm not interested" replied Tom who then shut the door.


Meanwhile, Lucie was getting cosy around Bill's house, maybe too cosy as Bill and Lucie was having dinner with Bill's family, afterwards, Bill and Lucie went upstairs to talk about school, but within hours of chatting to one another, one thing led to another and they were kissing each other with passion, until Lucie stopped Bill from kissing her and said "this is a bit too early in our relationship, Bill" said Lucie, Bill anticipated this and asked Lucie if he could meet her parents, Lucie obliged intensely and they started kissing again with desire and love. Lucie and Bill eventually broke apart and Lucie told Bill that she would meet him tomorrow at school, what she did'nt know was that there was a hooded figure lurking outside Bill's house. Lucie then put her coat on, said bye to Bill's parents and opened the front door, by the time Lucie turned around from shutting the door, a hooded man stood in front of lucie and grabbed her by her waist, Lucie tried so desperately to escape, but the hooded man made off with her into the darkness.

                                          						**End of Chapter Three**


     **Chapter Three done, Chapters 5 and 6 coming to a website near you**
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Comments 
asoupir
27 December 2010
Two things I would watch for are run-on sentences; and punctuation and grammar.  The story itself is interesting enough, but hard to read because of those two things.  JMHO

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