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Wonderful poem, which I have and read before elsewhere. I would change 'under the bullets metallic' to 'under metallic bullets'. You have my absolute thumbs up!
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Sage like ! Love it.
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Awesome poem. Stoic but solid.
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Awesome poem. Great use of imagery. Keep it up.
JD
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