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This was great. Great writing skills and wording. But one question: does Avery really say "TRADER" or was it meant to be "TRAITOR"? Since it does have a bearman in it, I guess it could go both ways. Just asking if it was a misspelling or not. Keep up the good work !!!
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Thanks for reading my chapter Marcus! I did mean Traitor. I have read it so many times that I don't really read the words so much as know what it says. Thanks again for the proofing and encouragement it means a lot.
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