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intimacy

By wolfeyesofgoldenrays | Posted: 31 March 2011

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Sexual references
Sexual references

sex is not a game

its fun at the momment 

but brings you only pain

for you share a piece of your soul with someone else

you can't erase it or put that piece on a shelf

the intimacy is ment for those in love

not to scratch an itch

those who have sex cause they want to sait their lust

it's why the world is full of untrust

sex is love

sex is intimacy

so heed my words with sympathy

and don't have sex unless you're ready to

cause in the end

the only one to blame for the hurt ,shame,and mistake

is your partner and you

sex . . .

is the ultimate form of intimacy

so think before you choose it

cause it's you who ends up loosing more

then you think

sex isn't lust

its love...

it's intamacy

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Sue Daniel
31 March 2011

I've been trying to say something like this for many years, without sounding prudish - so, and having succeeded with flying colours, you are some twenty years or so much more wise than I.

I was happy when I got to line 16.  Do you need the last two lines?  Maybe it's just a matter of personal taste.

Excellent poem at 16 or 18 lines

El

wolfeyesofgoldenrays
01 April 2011

thank you :)

Sue Daniel
02 April 2011

And that's a much rounder ending than before....

El

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