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Spiritual Church

By Rosiemary | Posted: 01 April 2011

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Spiritual Church

 

I Walked into a Church

 With my head held low

I was greeted with love

From many people I didn’t know

 

The feeling of peace

 That came over me

Was one of great comfort

That I just couldn’t see

 

The person from the platform

May I come to you this person said

We know of the tears that have been shed

For your loved one

That’s not really dead

 

This body we have is just a cloak

The soul lives on

And this gave me hope

I thanked this person with all of my heart

Who made me feel better right from the start

 

A Spiritual Church is a wonderful place

I thank God and his Angels

Who are full of grace

I had some answers that I had been looking for

All I did was walk through the door

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Comments 
Sue Daniel
03 April 2011

Hi Rosiemary

I had a similar experience to this many, many, many years ago (yes, I'm really quite old).  I felt forgiven for the sins of my youth much more than at any normal church, and was also invited to a Bhuddist prayer meeting not long afterwards where I quite litterally saw rays of light coming out of the ordinary but very beautiful human souls around me during the meditation - Bhuddists, some of whom were also Christians.

I like very much that you write so passionately about what you believe.  a Don Quixote spirit, if I may...

You seem to have a story to tell, and plenty of passion to move it along.  Have you ever thought of writing a short story or a novel to let it shine through the dark of the world?  I think the rest of us might be surprised.

El

Grampa Pogi
05 April 2011

Hi Rosiemary,

It might not matter which church, but your spiritual church is full of love, hope and peace. God bless.

Grampa

dipcah
19 July 2011

I was Vice President of a Spiritualist church for several years and you have described very well what I saw from my side of things. People would inevitably come in with head bent low...I gained such pleasure from seeing how they would leave. Thank you for your description.

Writer
Rosiemary

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