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I honestly, really like your poem!
I'm not sure about the last line though. I would have presumed that the trees were the source of beauty but they're already gone.
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They make a desert and call it peace.
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You really made me "feel" for the plight of the trees and the "loss" that took place. However, I think the last sentence could be improved upon. I wanted you to tell us what our loss is rather than vaguely questioning what our loss is. Other than that, great job!
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